FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55
WITHOUT A RAINY DAY I COULD
NOT KNOW THE SUN IS SHINING
Thunder is booming
and the bright'ning Lightning
It is all so exciting
Having long been kept at bay
At last, rain coming our way
Plentifully drench this day
Hear noise, feel wet
Ordered chaos--it is set
we will soon have met
God's Wonderful Power's
descent--on all His flowers
And finely, man-built towers
Friday Flash Fiction 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one.
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
Beautiful picture of "Let's Bring On the Rain"
from: blogs.nyu.edu
16 comments:
i love this picture you've drawn. nothing better than a summer storm
You describe the moment when it comes perfectly.
I love the rain. Indeed one would not realize their significance without the other ( The rain and the sun)
We dragons love to fly in the rain. We love your description .
Great 55
Ours is posted
HERE.
I love what you describe. And the unmentioned sometimes surprise at the end - rainbows.
NICE!!!!!!!!! ♥
I hear and see and feel it.
Wish it were here!
wow, you did it, is this your first 55!! did i miss last weeks. how cool is that t o try something different, great job on your willingness to try something different and you succeeded well. did you go to the dragons and check out the words?
Clean and Crazy: Yep, I went to the dragons, copied out new words, their meanings, tried to write, using prescribed words, even dumb poetry (missed an AA meeting, spent two hours practicing using new words, etc.)...it then dawned on me that I'm in WAY over my head on this "55" thing...
Better just get back to blogging--can't wait!
But thank you for your kind words.
Ah, Steve-0-Adventurer, you have done an excellent and lyrical job on your first 55.
My lawn is thankful because even as I write this it is raining, finally. I loved your 55.
ah Steve this is great - If I had known i would have sent you my rain drops!
Great 55 Steve! Sorry I missed you yesterday.
I like the quote about the rainy day. The sun is shining here today.
This is terrific Steve!!! [I wish it would RAIN HERE!!!!]
Have a great Friday my friend.
We are supposed to get rain Sunday.
Last week at Rosalie's we had a big ole thunderstorm, just shook the house like we were on a dragon's back. The sky was gorgeous. Love them at night.
Mamie was like glue to me. Lov you post.
The picture and your words together could *almost* make me like rain! Maybe I just see too much of it to ever appreciate it... but I liked your 55!
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