Flash Fiction Friday 55
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
is a story written in exactly 55 words.
Let the G-Man know if you write one
and read the ones of your fellow writers.
ME! Pick me. Pick ME!
Yesss it is I, fruitcake of fruits
wishing to become
not necessarily
Chosen One--
Just one of
Pick me, pick me
might well have meant
Pickle me
Again...about being chosen
As belonging. Oh!
The myth of
Alone and lonely
Fitting in nowhere
Despondent
Depressed
Pick This
Piece of Shit
Yesss it is I, fruitcake of fruits
wishing to become
not necessarily
Chosen One--
Just one of
Pick me, pick me
might well have meant
Pickle me
Again...about being chosen
As belonging. Oh!
The myth of
Alone and lonely
Fitting in nowhere
Despondent
Depressed
Pick This
Piece of Shit
SOBER, Peeps
LOVE, Peeps
PEACE, Peeps
From me to you, Peeps
30 comments:
Good job with your 55 words! And yep, everybody want to belong and everybody feels "less than" when they don't. Fitting picture. I hadn't seem this 55 words thing...will look into it.
This is kind of a telling one for me. I felt out of place at a lot for a long time. It's good to actually fit.
Sure is nice to be "a part of" these days instead of a piece of shit. Did you do the drawing? I love it.
I'm up:
Friday Flash 55 ~ DELETE
I have those days
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Yeah... I did EVERYTHING I could to fit in in EVERY situation I could put myself in. It is nice today to fit in, every day, anywhere I go, just by being me.
Nice job!
Haunting in its own way. Great 55. My 55 is here.
Wow kind of tough when one feels this way but then I think we all do at one time or the other. Nice 55 Love the drawing also look forward to reading you again.
you'll find mine below.
Drive In Movie
Wow kind of tough when one feels this way but then I think we all do at one time or the other. Nice 55 Love the drawing also look forward to reading you again.
you'll find mine below.
Drive In Movie
Powerful words - a feeling we simply have to learn to rise above to survive.
Excellently done.
don't we all want to be picked. its desolate and lonely to be the last one left... great 55!!!
Y'know Steve, we've all been there before!! This is most powerful.
My is now posted today - just scroll down a bit, below my show n tell Click Here
haunting 55. there were many a day i just hoped to be picked...nicely done.
mine is up!
I've felt that 55'er as well my friend, well told
Cool drawing! Those lines are awesome.
Your 55 caught my childhood. So sad.
I have finished my 55.
You’ll find it
HERE.
.
But it’s a groaner.
Oh this one I feel keenly
Oh I know that feeling so well... Damn- this makes feel sad again
(The unloved have met here today)
Sweeet Peep
Great 55
Wow, Steve. Powerful one this week. You are very talented.
Love to you.
I truly hate seeing someone being picked last.Feeling ALONE is horrible.. but we have all gone through it. great 55.. and BTW lol as always you made me laugh though this, PICK ME pick this piece of shit. LOL
Blessing and have a great WEEKEND.. HUGS
I think you touched a little part in each of us. Excellent 55 Steve-O! The drawing just illustrates your words sooo well!
I pick u, because you are like me
Happy Friday!
This is oh so funny and sad at the same time. Well done.
Flash 55 - Blue Gill
I was always picked last in school for sports and such. Looking back, I was not athletic in the least so I can see why they may not seek out the one who fumbles the ball all the time! But oh how I desired to fit in and be picked. So now, I just try and pick myself:) Great 55, mine is up.
i always said i didn't want to be picked, great 55.
Sad one Steve ...very sad!
But one that so many can relate to.
Well done!
Have a great weekend!
Blessings to you ...always!
Margie:)
Steve...
Very powerful, very fitting to some!
You sure can capture an emotion!
Excellent 55 Brother.
Thanks for playing today, and have a Wonderful Week-End...G
Piece of Steve!!
Lindo Steve!!I pick u!!
Besos:)
I pick you!
Mine is even sadder than yours.
we love beach meetings.
http://www.soberliving.com
the sense of belonging is always so soothing
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