Write any kind of story in exactly 55 words.
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The phone call is between one man (whose words are bold font) and a woman, who (PLEASE IMAGINE) speaks in a sultry, sexy, very audible whisper:
CONVERSATION?
RING!.....RING!.....RING!..
Hello?
Are you busy?
Yessss...
Can I talk?
Oh please yes, do THAT.
I wish to put my hands here.
Hello?
Are you busy?
Yessss...
Can I talk?
Oh please yes, do THAT.
I wish to put my hands here.
Oh! That feels wonderful!
And touch you there...
Oh yes...NOW!
And kiss your
Oh, that is LOVELY.
And.....
Must you leave so soon?
Girl--have you been talking to ME?
...........Nooooo!
--steveroni
29 comments:
Stunning 55...really intriguing, Stev
Love it...Stev..clever write...bkm
LOL!
What a 55er!
Here is my Haibun in 55 words!
Umm! Interesting dilemma --- love the photo and graffiti on the wall, great conversation,
Cheers,
Joanny
I hope this didn't happen to you?
my55er here
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
heee heee heeee, excellent!
haha. i had a profund opportunity once to meet one of those ladies on teh other side of those 800/900 lines...if i ever had the inkling to call one of them, it was cured that day. smiles.
nice 55.
Oh my....this is a good one Steve!!!
Here is my 55 link
I don't think I will ever get used to the concept of phone/txt/chat sex talk. It's kinda like decaf coffee and non-alcoholic beer. But I do love your twist today...I chuckled and that is a pretty good start to this weekend.
♥namaste♥
you naughty man!! great 55
JOANNY and others:
Nope I don't DO 'phone sex'..we'', what I mean is I never had to PAY for it--grin!
Thanks for comments--busy weekend playing wedding(s) and other stuff.
PEACE
LOVE
Steve
Enjoyed both the subtle and bold elements of the dialogue. Great image as well. Tight write!
Clever 55.. Lol..
Mine is up..
--Someone Is Special--
Brilliant 55 and I'm left feeling sorry for the man.
great performance by all three.
Way to go with another fabulous 55
I'm thing g will hoot and holler at this one
have a great weekend my friend
you were probably lucky that day..
haha steve - you are just too good...!!
hummmm some guys seem to be obssesed with one thought or idea (LOL), even when they are face to cace with the one...
I know you are not one of those, or are you?
this has been fun to read
Great 55
Funny stuff and great 55.
I see you got so flustered you posted it twice! (LOL!)
Intriguing 55, Sterveroni!
Lol. that was puzzling. fun take!
Ah, the mixing and the mingling of love and words. And communication devices.
Awesome!!
And I was so happy to see you over on my blog again, you are a fun special person.
xo
Clever 55. You know, the whole phone/text thing seems like a fat-free ice cream sundae, you know?
hmmmm, that was nice...
really fun! good 55!
:) i smile , i smile
quite busy really, just smiling
Who were you talking to?
Steve, I can't find your e-mail address. Just e-mail me at mme.canongate@gmail.com
I hope you check back here for comments. I didn't knw where else to go.???
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh geez. You had me at Bbbbrrrruupppp. And now I come here and see THIS and your winged ride to Starbucks..... Oh, why would ANYONE limit you to just 55 words! HAHAHAHAHA!
That was too good!!!
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