55-WORD FRIDAY...A DREAM
If you wish to join in the fun, write a piece in exactly 55 words, publish on or before Friday, notify G-Man and visit and comment other 55-writers....
THE DREAM
ZZZZZzzzzzzzz
One single moment that night met day
While enjoying the sweet sound
Of nature, a bird came to say
"Hey! See who I have found!"
And...many miles from my home
Sleeping in the house of another
I stumbled in dark hallway to roam
Where used to live--your mother
Back to bed for awhile.
While enjoying the sweet sound
Of nature, a bird came to say
"Hey! See who I have found!"
And...many miles from my home
Sleeping in the house of another
I stumbled in dark hallway to roam
Where used to live--your mother
Back to bed for awhile.
ZZZZZzzzzzzzz
26 comments:
THURSDAY NIGHT I published this "55" but (alas?) it did not appear on Peeps' blogs' sidebars.
There WERE four comments, which I have lost in re-publishing, so I apologize to Brian, Mr. G...and two others (DAMMMMM MEMORY!)
Have a GREAT! Weekend, Peeps!!!!!
Well it's here now and worth the wait.
Short, sweet and beautiful.
ME
This is a very interesting 55. Makes me wonder what is really going on.
I loved the first line very much, a great opening for a beautiful poem.
Yes. That is the stuff of dreams. My house but not. My 55 is HERE .
Oh, the middle of those long nights!At least dreams keep us busy. :)
you painted a beautiful picture
Nice dream and I love the illustration too. :)
dream on dreamweaver...nice 55
Visiting the in laws?
A mystical, magical and mysterious 55 indeed, Steveroni. I loved the dream-like melody of your words.
was surprised to see it again...i am sure i sadi something insightful...i did see my mother yesterday...so why were you there? lol. nice 55...
This is a mysterious 55, my friend. I loved discovering that you were roaming the house of your in-laws. I stumble in the dark, too.
well,
I see you play, smile, have fun "fooling" around in this piece...
an old boy,
lovely spirits...
I will be really scared if you actually want to see me, I am afraid of earthworms, u know...thinking or imaging is fun though.
that is another of those dreams not evrn the dreamer sometimes can understand... But dreams are there to tell us something...doing so in just 55 a success!!
Hugs
I slept great because I was exhausted. I wasn't up roaming. And no dreams either.
Di we dream the dream, or is the dream dream us? My 55
I must say...
I LOVE when you do this 55 words posts!
I enjoy them a lot and I like the hability you have to show a lot in such a short space.
:)
Im really glad one day I found you!
Great 55..... !!!!!!!
hey this is interesting, several reads and it's still fresh.
Thanks for visiting.
Di
Cool 55 and even coooler pic! Have a great weekend!! :)
dreams can turn into nightmares
really nice one
thanks for stopping by the Moon
the Merit badge Flash 55 was a fond memorie from when I was young.
maybe you'll like this one too.
Drive In Movies
Thanks for reading...
See.. You should probably not do acid before you go to bed.. You will have dreams like this one!
Other then that.. I stumble down dark hallways when I have to pee at night, usually I stub my toe. That shit hurts.
<3
a lovely poem of waking and dreaming the sounds of nature and memories dancing--great 55!
That was a cool 55...nice play on words. have finally found the time to visit now but better late than never I say!
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