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Friday, October 1, 2010

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY 55--ARE YOU BUSY? YES!

Write any kind of story in exactly 55 words. 
Comment on G-Man's BLOG and he will respond. 
Visit other 55-writers!  C'mon, it's kinda FUN!




The phone call is between one man (whose words are bold font) and a woman, who (PLEASE IMAGINE) speaks in a sultry, sexy, very audible whisper:

 CONVERSATION?

RING!.....RING!.....RING!..

Hello?

Are you busy?

Yessss...

Can I talk?

Oh please yes, do THAT.

 I wish to put my hands here.

Oh! That feels wonderful!
 

And touch you there...
 

Oh yes...NOW!

And kiss your

Oh, that is LOVELY.

And.....


Must you leave so soon?

Girl--have you been talking to ME?

...........Nooooo!

--steveroni

29 comments:

A Daft Scots Lass said...

Stunning 55...really intriguing, Stev

signed...bkm said...

Love it...Stev..clever write...bkm

gautami tripathy said...

LOL!

What a 55er!


Here is my Haibun in 55 words!

joanny said...

Umm! Interesting dilemma --- love the photo and graffiti on the wall, great conversation,

Cheers,
Joanny

I hope this didn't happen to you?

my55er here
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/

Shadow said...

heee heee heeee, excellent!

Brian Miller said...

haha. i had a profund opportunity once to meet one of those ladies on teh other side of those 800/900 lines...if i ever had the inkling to call one of them, it was cured that day. smiles.

nice 55.

HOOTIN' ANNI said...

Oh my....this is a good one Steve!!!

Here is my 55 link

Kim A. said...

I don't think I will ever get used to the concept of phone/txt/chat sex talk. It's kinda like decaf coffee and non-alcoholic beer. But I do love your twist today...I chuckled and that is a pretty good start to this weekend.

♥namaste♥

clean and crazy said...

you naughty man!! great 55

steveroni said...

JOANNY and others:

Nope I don't DO 'phone sex'..we'', what I mean is I never had to PAY for it--grin!

Thanks for comments--busy weekend playing wedding(s) and other stuff.

PEACE
LOVE
Steve

dustus said...

Enjoyed both the subtle and bold elements of the dialogue. Great image as well. Tight write!

Someone Is Special said...

Clever 55.. Lol..

Mine is up..

--Someone Is Special--

TALON said...

Brilliant 55 and I'm left feeling sorry for the man.

moondustwriter said...

great performance by all three.

Way to go with another fabulous 55
I'm thing g will hoot and holler at this one

have a great weekend my friend

Vodka Logic said...

you were probably lucky that day..

Claudia said...

haha steve - you are just too good...!!

Dulce said...

hummmm some guys seem to be obssesed with one thought or idea (LOL), even when they are face to cace with the one...
I know you are not one of those, or are you?

this has been fun to read

Great 55

Monkey Man said...

Funny stuff and great 55.

Eric Alder said...

I see you got so flustered you posted it twice! (LOL!)

Intriguing 55, Sterveroni!

Priyanka Bhowmick said...

Lol. that was puzzling. fun take!

Jannie Funster said...

Ah, the mixing and the mingling of love and words. And communication devices.

Awesome!!

And I was so happy to see you over on my blog again, you are a fun special person.

xo

PattiKen said...

Clever 55. You know, the whole phone/text thing seems like a fat-free ice cream sundae, you know?

Linda said...

hmmmm, that was nice...

Everyday Goddess said...

really fun! good 55!

jozien said...

:) i smile , i smile
quite busy really, just smiling

Syd said...

Who were you talking to?

Beachanny said...

Steve, I can't find your e-mail address. Just e-mail me at mme.canongate@gmail.com
I hope you check back here for comments. I didn't knw where else to go.???

Bella Sinclair said...

HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh geez. You had me at Bbbbrrrruupppp. And now I come here and see THIS and your winged ride to Starbucks..... Oh, why would ANYONE limit you to just 55 words! HAHAHAHAHA!

Cindybrown said...

That was too good!!!