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Friday, June 18, 2010

55-WORD FRIDAY...A DREAM

 55-WORD FRIDAY...A DREAM

If you wish to join in the fun, write a piece in exactly 55 words, publish on or before Friday, notify G-Man and visit and comment other 55-writers....


THE DREAM

ZZZZZzzzzzzzz

One single moment that night met day
While enjoying the sweet sound
Of nature, a bird came to say
"Hey! See who I have found!"

And...many miles from my home

Sleeping in the house of another
I stumbled in dark hallway to roam
Where used to live--your mother

Back to bed for awhile.


ZZZZZzzzzzzzz

26 comments:

steveroni said...

THURSDAY NIGHT I published this "55" but (alas?) it did not appear on Peeps' blogs' sidebars.

There WERE four comments, which I have lost in re-publishing, so I apologize to Brian, Mr. G...and two others (DAMMMMM MEMORY!)

Have a GREAT! Weekend, Peeps!!!!!

Prayer Girl said...

Well it's here now and worth the wait.

Short, sweet and beautiful.

ME

Nessa said...

This is a very interesting 55. Makes me wonder what is really going on.

Maha said...

I loved the first line very much, a great opening for a beautiful poem.

Monkey Man said...

Yes. That is the stuff of dreams. My house but not. My 55 is HERE .

jinksy said...

Oh, the middle of those long nights!At least dreams keep us busy. :)

A Daft Scots Lass said...

you painted a beautiful picture

Akelamalu said...

Nice dream and I love the illustration too. :)

showme said...

dream on dreamweaver...nice 55

Alice Audrey said...

Visiting the in laws?

Sam Liu said...

A mystical, magical and mysterious 55 indeed, Steveroni. I loved the dream-like melody of your words.

Brian Miller said...

was surprised to see it again...i am sure i sadi something insightful...i did see my mother yesterday...so why were you there? lol. nice 55...

Enchanted Oak said...

This is a mysterious 55, my friend. I loved discovering that you were roaming the house of your in-laws. I stumble in the dark, too.

Jingle said...

well,
I see you play, smile, have fun "fooling" around in this piece...
an old boy,
lovely spirits...

I will be really scared if you actually want to see me, I am afraid of earthworms, u know...thinking or imaging is fun though.

Dulce said...

that is another of those dreams not evrn the dreamer sometimes can understand... But dreams are there to tell us something...doing so in just 55 a success!!

Hugs

Syd said...

I slept great because I was exhausted. I wasn't up roaming. And no dreams either.

John's comments said...

Di we dream the dream, or is the dream dream us? My 55

Bananii said...

I must say...

I LOVE when you do this 55 words posts!

I enjoy them a lot and I like the hability you have to show a lot in such a short space.

:)

Im really glad one day I found you!

natalee said...

Great 55..... !!!!!!!

Dianne said...

hey this is interesting, several reads and it's still fresh.

Thanks for visiting.
Di

Lulda Casadaga said...

Cool 55 and even coooler pic! Have a great weekend!! :)

moondustwriter said...

dreams can turn into nightmares

really nice one

thanks for stopping by the Moon

Larry said...

the Merit badge Flash 55 was a fond memorie from when I was young.
maybe you'll like this one too.


Drive In Movies


Thanks for reading...

Sarah said...

See.. You should probably not do acid before you go to bed.. You will have dreams like this one!

Other then that.. I stumble down dark hallways when I have to pee at night, usually I stub my toe. That shit hurts.

<3

C.M. Jackson said...

a lovely poem of waking and dreaming the sounds of nature and memories dancing--great 55!

Jana said...

That was a cool 55...nice play on words. have finally found the time to visit now but better late than never I say!