THIS IS 55-WORD FRIDAY!!
High, high on the cliff,
Overlooking cold water's flow
Far, far away, so swift.
I dive to meet it below:
Ahh! actual moment of in-the-water-plunge.
I FEEL my body being "assumed" by saltness,
Beginning at finger tips,
Movement up my arms,
Head, shoulders enveloped
Immediately by the lips
Of ocean's sweet charms.
Overlooking cold water's flow
Far, far away, so swift.
I dive to meet it below:
Ahh! actual moment of in-the-water-plunge.
I FEEL my body being "assumed" by saltness,
Beginning at finger tips,
Movement up my arms,
Head, shoulders enveloped
Immediately by the lips
Of ocean's sweet charms.
--steveroni
36 comments:
refreshing!
I'd love to take a dive right now!
Thanks for taking The Plunge today Stevo...You Da Man!
Mature and sage-like as you are...
Thanks for this Dippy Ditty...
Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
What a sensual dive.
I can feel the cool, refreshing water as I read.
Give me some of that, please. It's so hot here.
I agree about the sensual. there is some kinda imagery going there
great 55 my friend
Very good 55.
makes me feel so revitalised.
nice 55...
I feel as if I have dipped my toes in ice cool water after reading this!
cool and inviting!
I could feel the cool water!
Now was he skinny dipping? Mine is mere demonic temptation in this week's 55!
Oh, now that felt refreshing, Steveroni! A great way to start off the weekend, I say. Very cool 55!!!
Nevine
very cool 55 Steveroni!
Refreshing, both image and words... I'm ready to jump right in!
Such a cool challenge, to create a scene and experience in this set amount of words - and you've done it perfectly! I long to experience a clean, pure, dip in the beautiful ocean...
I can almost feel myself diving in!
(Bleh! I hate salt water!)
very nice, I can picture it vividly. I could go for a cool dive right about now! Hope you have a great weekend!
Super !!
Very nice.
wow! so vivid! beautiful imagery!
exhillarating! (you know what I mean!)
Love that feeling. Great description. Thanks for stopping by my 55 which is HERE .
Oh, I liked this. Awesome description. I felt refreshed just reading it :-) And thanks for your kind words about Life is Good. I appreciate your encouragement so much.
Tina
Dive me there... will you?
;-)
Hi Steve.!!
Magical these letters as much as the ocean and water. There's something special in the water, we are essentially water.
So beautiful to fly high!
Besos:)
Beautiful, vibrant and so colourfully alive, Steveroni! You've truly captured that exhilarating and immensely cleansing point as our bodies dart into the cool waters of the sea...this is such a vivid poem, the imagery is a delight :)
This was just absolutely glorious, steve - you can come to San Francisco and you'll certainly feel invigorated diving into the sea around here!!! I, personally, prefer lukewarm water more commonly found in the Caribbean!!!
Very nice 55, you put me right there with your words. :)
Thanks for stopping by my blog and commenting on my 55 as well.
-C
very playful and excellent images!
I can appreciate that feeling of the ocean.
Steveroni, the poet!
How poignant this poem is considering what is happening in the gulf right now!
Hope you are Steve.
makes me wanna jump into the ocean right now.
Great 55!
makes me wanna jump into the ocean right now.
Great 55!
SPLASH! Nice 55 to read on a hot day like today! Thanks, Steve!
Totally refreshing...especially those last lines.
Nailed it in 55!! Wow!! And wonderfully too... Keep 'em coming..
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