DRINKING ALCOHOL TAUGHT ME HOW TO FLY
THEN IT TOOK AWAY THE SKY

Sunday, August 15, 2010

ONE MOMENT IN TIME!

IT
WAS
ONE
OF
THOSE
 DAYS


This IS fun, to write anything 
in exactly 160 characters 
--spaces counted also--
Then let MONKEY MAN know.
Sunday ONLY posting

This moment
Of mine
So bad
Feel sad
And a tad
Guilty

Pay the fine
Put behind
That stress
The mess
Live again.

Together forever
Here, there
Everywhere.

--steveroni

19 comments:

G-Man said...

What Ticket?
This is very mysterious..

BTW...I have a 160 as well!

Have a Safe trip Maestro.....G

G-Man said...

It seems to me that I've forgotten something....Oh Yeah...EUCHRE!!

Claudia said...

that's a mysterious 160 indeed - but according to the happy end - i guess you're all right...

Agneta said...

Godmorning, Sweden calling...

You really have a great personality and so even your blog. Thanks for the nice comment on my Wabi & Sabi.... me like!

Agneta

joanny said...

Interesting -- reminds me of Laurel and Hardy, or more common Stan and Ollie-- "another (nice) fine mess you gotten me into"

in the end though they always managed to escape and be friends again.

So glad yours had a happy ending too.

nice 160, I gave it a try this week too.

cheers,
Joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/

Scott said...

interesting... the mind take this wherever it wishes to go :-)

kool, Mr. Roni sir!

Monkey Man said...

A bit of a 'let it go' message for us. I like it. Thanks for being a part of my Sunday 160 fun.

Harris Channing said...

Hmmm, wonder what the fine was for?

Great Sun. 160. Yep, time to let it go...but some things are easier to let go of than others!

http://harrischanningauthor.blogspot.com/

Sam Liu said...

A very charming 160, Steveroni. Intriguing and mysterious, I wonder what the crime was?

Brian Miller said...

ooch...hope the fine was not too much...at least it ended happy...

Manon Doyle said...

Yup..... glad it ended happy....live again.

Thanks for your comments on my last painting, my friend. I've been away taking care of life. I'm happy to be back now blogging away!! : )
Happy Sunday!!

Linda said...

have a happy day, sweet steve, hoping you are well as one can never tell with your sometimes cryptic little notes...no worries over those comments btw, you come by whenever the Spirit moves and that's what counts, my friendxoxo

Little Seed said...

Ah, your 160 is mysterious and intriguing! I take it you did a "180" at the end. :)

PS Hope to see you soon. Your opinion on my latest post is wanted!

Haiku hugs, LS

chiccoreal said...

Dear Steveroni: Loved this "pay the ticket". If not they take away the driver's license. All about rendering unto Caesars what is Caesars. Pay the piper Monkeyman! Screech Screech! Says Monkeyman! Oh I get the "Keys" feel here. Definitely that Hemingway atmosphere; To the Point POV!

Blythe Landry said...

Hey Steeeeveeeee..
Sammy and I haven't heard from you in a looong time..come over to "our side" and say hi..
LOVE the birthday present by the way.
blythe and sammy

Maha said...

it's always better to stand up on your feet in "those moments" rather than sitting and moaning. Beautiful 160 withy very great meanings!

Syd said...

It is good to live again regardless of what the fine was or the guilty moment. Time to move on, right?

dulce said...

Please do not feel bad or sad, just a bit mad (LOL)

blogoratti said...

Very well written...