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Friday, March 19, 2010

FLASH FICTION FRIDAY "55"


Let G-MAN know when you write 55 words--no more, no less--of fiction. And get ready to be swamped with 55s and comments galore...

"OOOPS!"

Lights flashed,
Siren sounded,
The shiny white-and-blue
Stayed behind
As I rounded
The corner at sixty-two.

"Why did you stop me?"

"I will show you".

Behind my car,
Sticking out the trunk
Dangled the bloody and mangled
Arm of a man named Syd.
Why did I not remember to
Close the trunk lid?

28 comments:

Sh@KiR@ CK said...

I LOVE this the most for this week!
Excellent 55!

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Keep the FUNNIES in your weekends!

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Secretia said...

That is an interesting short story!

anthonynorth said...

Gruesome with fun. Excellent.

Brian Miller said...

haha. yeah i got pulled over like tht once...lol, just kidding. nice 55.

mine is up!

Peter Stone said...

Certainly hope that's fiction, specially with that mangled arm, LOL.

My 55 is Everything I Lack

Hootin' Anni said...

Oh oh....'caught red handed' in a way, huh?

Glad to see you back again. You've been missed.

Here's mine Take Pleasure - 101

Have a super terrific weekend.

Jess Mistress of Mischief said...

LOL OMG that's funny!

Dulce said...

OMG Peep
What were you thinking about when you wrote this? I wonder and wonder, but cannot imagine...
LOL
LOVE!

Nevine said...

Yow! Wicked and spooky, Steve. An interesting side of you... Nice!

Nevine

Prayer Girl said...

DEAR PEEP,

So I see the darker side of Mr. Steve.

LOVE, LOVE, LOVE
FROM YOUR WIFE -
PRAYER GIRL

chitowngreg said...

Cute! Remember the old "Point/Counterpoint" from 60 Minutes a bunch of years ago? Must be Syd's turn now! Have a good one!

JStar said...

Ok, if you are gonna do criminal things...at least be a smart criminal...lol..dont people watch CSI now days lol

Love your 55!

Syd said...

Interesting....must be something Freudian about this story.

Enchanted Oak said...

Steve! You are a sly one today!

Buzzard said...

Well Officer, I can't believe Syd let go of the TV he was holding.
LOL

Mine is here: My Invisibility

Shadow said...

its all in the details... great 55.

drybottomgirl said...

Steve,
"If you wish to forget anything on the spot, make a note that this thing is to be remembered" -Edgar Allan Poe. See, you were doomed from the start! Have an aweseome weekend!

Nessa said...

Steve, you've got to cross your T's and dot your I's when murdering people.

Flash 55 - Help?

Jessie said...

this was fun -- nice rhyme and rhythm...

no worries -- it's all good -- even Ms. Prudence (the unknown Jessie) says,

"Have a Kick-Ass Weekend!!!"
Lol

Angeles said...

Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction. It's good that something stop us.
At the sixty-two or whenever..It'is always a good time.
Besos:)

Superfluous Brunette said...

ahahahahahahaha. I think you left the lid up on purpose, so you would be caught :)

Yvonne said...

Ouch. I hate it when that happens. And I just thought you had an expired tag or a brake light out. This is the first surprise I've had today. So kudos to you!

Jingle said...

neat!
you draw me in and what a fun 55.

Ji said...

http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/03/19/55-how-do-you-relax-during-weekends/

it would be nice to have you attention, new hand as me,
Happy Friday!

Kristin H. said...

Nice :)

It's got a cool edge to it. Very "Stephen King."

Kim A. said...

I'm laughing over something that will probably give Syd nightmares. I'm sick, I tell ya, sick. :-D

♥namaste♥

PattiKen said...

Oh, my, ghoulish fellow, aren't you? Love it!

My 55 is up here.

Selchie said...

Ha ha great! xx