Let G-MAN know when you write 55 words--no more, no less--of fiction. And get ready to be swamped with 55s and comments galore...
"OOOPS!"
Lights flashed,
Siren sounded,
The shiny white-and-blue
Stayed behind
As I rounded
The corner at sixty-two.
"Why did you stop me?"
"I will show you".
Behind my car,
Sticking out the trunk
Dangled the bloody and mangled
Arm of a man named Syd.
Why did I not remember to
Close the trunk lid?
28 comments:
I LOVE this the most for this week!
Excellent 55!
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Keep the FUNNIES in your weekends!
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That is an interesting short story!
Gruesome with fun. Excellent.
haha. yeah i got pulled over like tht once...lol, just kidding. nice 55.
mine is up!
Certainly hope that's fiction, specially with that mangled arm, LOL.
My 55 is Everything I Lack
Oh oh....'caught red handed' in a way, huh?
Glad to see you back again. You've been missed.
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Have a super terrific weekend.
LOL OMG that's funny!
OMG Peep
What were you thinking about when you wrote this? I wonder and wonder, but cannot imagine...
LOL
LOVE!
Yow! Wicked and spooky, Steve. An interesting side of you... Nice!
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DEAR PEEP,
So I see the darker side of Mr. Steve.
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Cute! Remember the old "Point/Counterpoint" from 60 Minutes a bunch of years ago? Must be Syd's turn now! Have a good one!
Ok, if you are gonna do criminal things...at least be a smart criminal...lol..dont people watch CSI now days lol
Love your 55!
Interesting....must be something Freudian about this story.
Steve! You are a sly one today!
Well Officer, I can't believe Syd let go of the TV he was holding.
LOL
Mine is here: My Invisibility
its all in the details... great 55.
Steve,
"If you wish to forget anything on the spot, make a note that this thing is to be remembered" -Edgar Allan Poe. See, you were doomed from the start! Have an aweseome weekend!
Steve, you've got to cross your T's and dot your I's when murdering people.
Flash 55 - Help?
this was fun -- nice rhyme and rhythm...
no worries -- it's all good -- even Ms. Prudence (the unknown Jessie) says,
"Have a Kick-Ass Weekend!!!"
Lol
Sometimes truth is stranger than fiction. It's good that something stop us.
At the sixty-two or whenever..It'is always a good time.
Besos:)
ahahahahahahaha. I think you left the lid up on purpose, so you would be caught :)
Ouch. I hate it when that happens. And I just thought you had an expired tag or a brake light out. This is the first surprise I've had today. So kudos to you!
neat!
you draw me in and what a fun 55.
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it would be nice to have you attention, new hand as me,
Happy Friday!
Nice :)
It's got a cool edge to it. Very "Stephen King."
I'm laughing over something that will probably give Syd nightmares. I'm sick, I tell ya, sick. :-D
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Oh, my, ghoulish fellow, aren't you? Love it!
My 55 is up here.
Ha ha great! xx
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