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Thursday, September 9, 2010

WHO IS IT?


FOLLOWING is Magpie #31
(thanks to WILLOW's Prompt) 

and since it is in 55 words, 
it will be my "55" 
Flash Fiction Friday this week


 MAGPIE plus "55"

 Peering through my window
Is it who?
Is it you?

I said that you
May walk through
The front door 

Make yourself at home
My home is
Yours

And what's more,
Whoever with
You is  

Also welcome
Now, then, or
Always

Oh! Your partner?
Your friend? I hope
She stays...

For here is Sweet PEACE   

--steve 










OK, Peeps, I have once again 
put on same posting,the 
Tuesday Magpie #31, 
and the Friday F "55"

NOTICE

For Magpie SIMPLE instructions, click HERE
and visit "Magpie Mom" WILLOW

For Flash Friday "55" click THIS
and tell Mr Know-It-All you "DID it!"

42 comments:

steveroni said...

When I found Magpie contained 53 words, I had to add only 2 words to make a "55"...please excuse me for combining--busy week, etc., etc. YOU know! L A Z Y --grin!

RNSANE said...

Ah, you sly fox....I don't blame you for combining two memes when you can! How neat is that? My befuddled brain seldom works that well!

Well done!

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Carrie Burtt said...

So you killed two birds with one stone did you? You did an awesome job of it Steve! Great Magpie (55)
:-)

JStar said...

:) This is cute...

Claudia said...

oh - i don't blame you - i combined two as well this week….

Brian Miller said...

thanks for leaving the door open for all of us steve...who could resist and invitation like that...

Sam Liu said...

Charming magpie and 55, Steveroni, as Brian said, the offer is irresistible :)

clean and crazy said...

very sweet indeed, i love this one.

margg. said...

i still think it's wonderful.

Gabriela Abalo said...

great combination!!
Nice poem :)

Kristen Haskell said...

Enjoyable poem but I am not familiar with 55 can someone enlighten me?

kathew said...

sweet peace....we can all welcome her!

G-Man said...

Seems like you and the Mrs, are always making folks seem welcome Maestro!
That why folks Love you.
Excellent 55 My Friend.
Thanks for playing and have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

Kay said...

multi-tasking...

a master-piece in and of its own

Tumblewords: said...

Multi-tasking seems to work very well for you - great piece!

KB said...

Party at your place then.

TALON said...

Makes me want to come for a visit! What a great poem!

Abhilasha-The Desire said...

Sweet peace.. we all can do with it from time to time... great poem

Anonymous said...

Hi Iam Prabhu from chennai,joined today in this forum... :)

A Daft Scots Lass said...

schweet. I heart this one.

HOOTIN' ANNI said...

Steve....this one is excellent!!!

Here's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!

Have a super weekend.

Dulce said...

Home sweet home...

Who is it?
It's me
No
It's you...
Mine is
HERE

Syd said...

Nice to open up your home to friends.

Nevine said...

Oh, Steveroni! I loved that bit about skipping the window and walking through the door. So very inviting. And such beautiful words. I feel welcomed. And appreciated. Now, I will take a seat... and just chill with you, Steve. ;-)

I loved this one to bits.

Nevine

willow said...

Welcome, open and loving. That's you. Wonderful Mag/55.

izzy said...

Good one-I followed your lead- if we keep combining these things may
become extinct ! Cheers-

Raven said...

I combine prompts all the time on my writing blog. Sometimes it makes it more fun.

Great poem, it's very sweet.

Eric Alder said...

Well, I have to disagree with some of the other commenters here. It's not being LAZY just because you're smart enough to kill two birds with one stone.

(It's called "multi-tasking")

It takes concerted effort, concentration and intelligence to pull it off successfully - none of which can be construed as being lazy.

Have a great weekend, Steveroni!

senderupwords said...

Your excused ;) Nice write. Bisous, Love and Light, Sender

Monkey Man said...

Nicely done. Doubling up like this is a special challenge. I'm up as well.

drybottomgirl said...

I found this comforting (I actually read it this morning but everytime I tried to comment I got interrupted because I'm at work shhhhhhhhhh) saying you have a place for someone to stop by, and meaning it. Shelter and safety, the walls of AA have give me, you, and countless others a place where we are safe, validated, accepted, and understood...priceless. Hope you have a super duper weekend!

drybottomgirl said...

I found this comforting (I actually read it this morning but everytime I tried to comment I got interrupted because I'm at work shhhhhhhhhh) saying you have a place for someone to stop by, and meaning it. Shelter and safety, the walls of AA have give me, you, and countless others a place where we are safe, validated, accepted, and understood...priceless. Hope you have a super duper weekend!

Mona said...

You sound like quite a host :)

Someone Is Special said...

I loved the take.. combo offer..

True Love

True Love Never Ends

--Someone Is Special--

moondustwriter said...

I'm liking this style Steve.
and of course we all appreciate you and your lovely!!!


Happy Weekend

Moon smiles

joanny said...

Steve

Beautiful doorway -- when one closes another opens,

A great idea, to combine Magpie and G-Man's. I may borrow a page from your book, -- agree with your comment about the early posting.

Cheers,
Joanny

Rene/ Not The Rockefellers said...

this is beautiful
and you're so hospitable
and flexible.

Rene

Jingle said...

your kindness outshine yourself.
love your 55.

Lena said...

What a welcoming Magpie....! Can I bring my teenage son, too....and kinda...leave him there?

steveroni said...

LENA, that is SO FUNNY! Well, I am going to move...and leave not a forwarding address. However, I can tell YOU:
it will be somewhere near the South Pole, Antarctica. leaving NOW! --grinning

Helen said...

We could etch this on something and make a front door sign .......... I loved it!

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